Thursday, April 8, 2010

BIG research paper thesis

The drinking age should remain 21. The reasons for this are because underage drinking causes health issues and teenage deaths.

5 comments:

  1. You should add more detail to make it more interesting or different vocabulary but i agree with your opinion.

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  2. I agree with Wayne, you need to add more details. Your straight to the point though so thats good. I also believe that you should add more effects that drinking have on teens.

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  3. Add more support and details to make your argument more compelling.

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  4. I Didn't Know Either. But I See We Have Similar Views On The Topic.

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  5. At least your point is clear. *shrug*

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